As promised, here are the lyrics for the second and third place winners! (you guys still need to tell me what you want your commissions to be, by the way. :D ) I’m keeping the first place lyrics (by Jqlgirl aka BlizzardBreeze) under wraps for now, as work is currently in production on the song itself.

2nd place entry, by Eleven Doctors Adventures:

Flying school, such a pain

Flapping wings, tumbling

She’s so cool, rainbow mane

Try to speak, mumbling

With my Freeze Ray I will stop the world

With my Freeze Ray I will

Find the time to find the words to

Tell you how, how you make

Make me feel, what’s the phrase?

Like a foal, kinda sick

Special needs, anyways

With my Freeze Ray I will stop the pain   

I don’t need chocolates or an ice cream

That’s all Pony Joe

I just think you need time to know

That I can stand up for myself

I’ll be the one with all the wealth

Equestria will fall to us

And I’ll prove I’m no wuss

That’s the plan: Rule the world

You and me, any day

Love your mane

“What?”

“Oh, no, I, um, nevermind.”

Anyway

With my Freeze Ray I will stop

3rd place entry, by Gaian Luck:

Shopping day, see you out

Cyan wings, fluttering

Wanna say, love your coat

here I go.. sputtering

With my sweet ray I will shock the world

With sweet ray I will change their ways, and

what they say, I’ll

Tell you now

What you make

What I feel

what the hay…

Like a foal,

kinda sick,

horribly…

anyway…

With my sweet ray I will stop the pain.

It won’t shoot frosting, or a fruit sauce,

that’s more Pinkie Pie,

I just hope there’s a way that I

can find a way to tell you, Dash

The way you make my heart beat fast

And we’ll change the hearts of ponykind

And then our love will biiiind-

That’s the plot, change the world

all I saught, remarkable

Love your coat

Dash: Huh?

OH! That float!  (*points at pinkie pie drinking a root beer float*)

anyhoof…

With my sweet ray I will shock